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Faerie Ring

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Faerie Ring

 

 

Faeries come tonight to their clearing

Dancing feet and mystic cheering

On this special faerie night

Guided by firefly light

Music plays loudly

Heartily sing

All in the

Faerie

Ring

 

 

 

 

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  • Ellis gold member
    January 12
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    Delightful !


  • Legend silver member
    January 10
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    Not only is this poem pleasing on the eye with it layout but also a joyous little read Love it


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    January 1

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    Perfect form, excellent flow, wonderful rhyme and rhythm and totally enchanting. What delightful fun to be had in the Faery Ring. Well done poet on this most splendid entry. Bravo! ~Pamela


  • arafura
    December 28, 2007

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    Wonderful!

    This is just beautiful poet! I love the structure of this and the feeling I get when I read it! You take the reader on a magical ride... Good luck in the contest!


  • arafura
    December 28, 2007
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    lovely!

    This is just beautiful poet! I love the structure of this and the feeling I get when I read it! You take the reader on a magical ride... Good luck in the contest!

  • arafura
    December 28, 2007
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    lovely!

    This is just beautiful poet! I love the structure of this and the feeling I get when I read it! You take the reader on a magical ride... Good luck in the contest!

  • Dragon Tamer
    December 27, 2007

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    Very imaginative

    This is very cool and imaginative! I also loved the layout of your poem.Thank you for sharing this bit of fantasy with us and best of luck in the contest!

    Don


  • poorpete greenslade gold member
    December 27, 2007
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    lovely little flutter this , quite enchanting good luck xx pp


  • moonbumps silver member
    December 27, 2007
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    Good luck with this extremely clever write.xxx

  • mysticwriter silver member
    December 27, 2007
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    Lovely write,Sue...excellent poem to match image...good luck in the contest...mystery


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    December 26, 2007

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    This was put together very well, a fine piece of magick.

    Good Luck,
    Síochán leat
    ~Mairéad~


  • Nicolette Everett
    December 26, 2007

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    With the music I'm listening to as I read your poem, they intertwined and I could see your faeries dancing and moving so magnificently. It was really nice.
    The way you wrote your poem is great as well. Nice and beautiful job!

  • Bad Bill
    December 26, 2007
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    Very nicely structured and worded--good one.

    Bill


  • Lily otv
    December 26, 2007

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    I think the faeries made this as it is so beautiful in shape and content. The syllable count is perfect too. A truly magical piece in my view. Good luck in the contest

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