Faerie Ring
Faeries come tonight to their clearing
Dancing feet and mystic cheering
On this special faerie night
Guided by firefly light
Music plays loudly
Heartily sing
All in the
Faerie
Ring
Author notes
Anonymous, you all know what that means, thanks.
In a list
A contest entry
- Fairy Flutter by Pamela A Lamppa.
2250 points, ended January 1, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Magical...
I can see the fairies dancing...lovely light-filled poem....
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Many thanks for reading and leaving a comment ... I appreciate both.
Sue
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Delightful !
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Not only is this poem pleasing on the eye with it layout but also a joyous little read Love it
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Perfect form, excellent flow, wonderful rhyme and rhythm and totally enchanting. What delightful fun to be had in the Faery Ring. Well done poet on this most splendid entry. Bravo! ~Pamela
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Wonderful!
This is just beautiful poet! I love the structure of this and the feeling I get when I read it! You take the reader on a magical ride... Good luck in the contest!
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lovely!
This is just beautiful poet! I love the structure of this and the feeling I get when I read it! You take the reader on a magical ride... Good luck in the contest! -
lovely!
This is just beautiful poet! I love the structure of this and the feeling I get when I read it! You take the reader on a magical ride... Good luck in the contest! -
Very imaginative
This is very cool and imaginative! I also loved the layout of your poem.Thank you for sharing this bit of fantasy with us and best of luck in the contest!
Don
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lovely little flutter this , quite enchanting good luck xx pp
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Good luck with this extremely clever write.xxx
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Lovely write,Sue...excellent poem to match image...good luck in the contest...mystery
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This was put together very well, a fine piece of magick.
Good Luck,
Síochán leat
~Mairéad~
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With the music I'm listening to as I read your poem, they intertwined and I could see your faeries dancing and moving so magnificently. It was really nice.
The way you wrote your poem is great as well. Nice and beautiful job!
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Very nicely structured and worded--good one.
Bill
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I think the faeries made this as it is so beautiful in shape and content. The syllable count is perfect too. A truly magical piece in my view. Good luck in the contest
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