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twisted love

i know she doesn't like me
but i love her
i know she doesn't want me
but i need her

so i try all the time
to catch her eye
and i try all the time
to make her cry
for me

maybe one day
i can break through the crust
maybe one day
i can make her fall in lust

i try every day
to make her say i love
i hear everyday
her say someone other than you!

hoping that it's love
i know that it's lust
hoping that it's love
because she's a must

so i become notch after notch
on her belt
i'm working my way through
give it a week and there won't be anything
(holding her pants up)

i know it's true
she doesn't love me like you
but at the end of the day
she rolled over onto me

Author notes

this is my idea of a love song.
so from the bottom of my heart i sing for you

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i want, need, love, lust: fork!

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  • draagyn
    December 27, 2007

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    YES

    lol. BEst line: I want, need, love, lust: fork! lol. That would be your idea of a love song. silly you. who're you seducing now? hehe.


  • ShInE45DoWn
    December 26, 2007

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    I WANT! NEED! LOVE! LUST: FORK.
    lolololol i still haven't figured out what that means. Maybe it was "For K" ...but i never dated a K....
    Best.stanza.ever.
    "so i become notch after notch
    on her belt
    i'm working my way through
    give it a week and there won't be anything
    (holding her pants up)"
    ily bro. miss you already_<3


    • Mr Majenta gold member
      December 26, 2007
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      wow, i read my "question" line and i saw exactly what you meant, maybe it's our subconsiousnesses trying to seduce her

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