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R.I.P

A light extinguished
And, yet, a light ignited.

Hearts emptied.

Eyes filled.

Heaviness and darkness descend.

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  • Naridill gold member
    December 30, 2007

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    Lighter side of a darker thought. Very aspiring. Nicely done indeed.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • DrunkenRam
    December 27, 2007
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    Sounds like someone went too early, sad. nice write, the pace is perfect


    • Gigglegasm gold member
      December 27, 2007
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      Many do. There's been an awful lot of deaths in my area recently - including two murders on Christmas Day. Unbelieveable!

      Thank you!