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Beauty Instilled

Eternal beauty unfolds.
Love as fragrant
as a rose.
It's beauty
unending.
Its fragile-yet
unbending.
Sweet and thrilling.
Its tenderness
instilling so
deep in my soul.
It's beauty bestows.
How will I know
if it's real?
What's this I feel?


A contest entry

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  • he broke me
    January 5, 2008
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    wonderful... this is so beautiful... good luck in the contest


  • penman gold member
    December 31, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    December 28, 2007

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    wonderful words poetess, so glad I returned the favor, you do very well and best of luck in the contest.
    Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate it.
    ephiphany


  • m2lost24get
    December 26, 2007
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    one know if it feels real when you missed them when you are apart more than you realize with every fiber of your being. when their smile lights up your heart in the darkest of nights or moods. love is truly as fragile as a perfect rose. thank you for entering and many blessings always xx

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