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My little dog Fluffy

I once had a puppy
that was big and grumpy,
his name was fluffy.

Fluffy was a mean little puppy,
with his big brown eyes and
long black nose, he was really ugly,
he felt like goo,and ate my food,
fluffy was a mean little puppy.

Fluffy was a mean little puppy,
that hated my little cow scruffy,
one day he ate my scruffy and that
is when i realized fluffy wasn't a puppy,
he was a mean little bear that had no hair
and thought life wasn't fair,
so i ate that mean little bear.


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  • Bob Fox
    April 22, 2008

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    lol

    The imagination of a poet can at times make one smile and you have just done that for me. Happy writing my young friend. For to smile is good


    • Z1-N-OnlyEvilMonkey
      April 25, 2008
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      lol

      Thanks so much. I didnt think that people would like this one because of how very cheesy it is. I was expecting more of stupid, cheesy, fluffy poem.....?
      keep on writing!!


  • Flight of Dragons
    March 10, 2008

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    LOL laugh till I cried. That's so cruel how could Summer! why kill the mean bear fluffy?. . .Kidding. anyways that was enjoyable to read. . .cheezy as it is.


  • poetwomen
    February 12, 2008
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    Lol

    Lol its cute


  • Hyakkimaru Nyktos
    January 1, 2008
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    LMFAO nice babe

  • xxxhellaxhaleyxxx
    December 28, 2007
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    awesomeness!!!!!

  • Saxmirage
    December 28, 2007
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    lmao

    That was classic comedy. : )

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