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Unnatural Disaster

Crashing clouds, ripping skies,
Temptuous devils, tormented flies.
See the fibres of the dome divide
And in the tear shall reside
All i ever said to you
All you ever put me through.
You wouldn't have embraced me
We were both so lonely
And are two still,
                Locked in the chasm
                It ever slowly closes
Restricting tightness, lack of brightness
Crushing ribcage, heart a dying bird.
You can(not) live without me dear
Though it does fulfil your greatest fears.
As you look to the thin heavens
empass forcing your last breath.
It will be my face seen before you,
My hands around your neck.

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  • Emonessia
    March 14, 2008
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    alex babes you're a legendary poet!!!!!! ILY xxxxxxx

  • Sign of the Swine
    January 2, 2008

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    Wow, you're extremely talented. I admire the way you're able to rhyme yet it's not forced, everything just flows into this beautiful story with great imagery. Nice write.