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Irresistible Impulse

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  • sunny day
    January 13, 2008

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    mjith, Congratulations on the Honorable Mention you received here. Your words painted a wonderful picture and I especially loved the ending as I see that small beam of light as the smile which is all it takes. Thank you for sharing this with all of us and keep the ink flowing. Love and God bless, Joyce

  • hose30
    December 27, 2007

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    Wow great write. This is fabulous. I love your words here. I loved how you phased everything here.You did a n excellent job Sis. But you know you are great writer Sis anyway.I hope you have a great day. Love you.


  • m2lost24get
    December 26, 2007

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    well done and i know the emotions and gravitational pulling of the heart the write speaks of. an intense enlightenment is all it takes on a roller coaster ride of emotions. for their smile sends the mind and heart into eternal euphoria. thank you for entering and many blessings always xx