Do I really cry?
Can I really cry?
Please tell me I
can cry.
Is it ok I already miss
you? Is it all right
I'm going to miss
you?
I really don't want
you to leave, it's
slowly killing me.
I can't breathe, I
can't speak, I can't
feel anything but
the pain anymore!
God save me please,
cause I can't live
once you leave.
Author notes
I wrote this Christmas Eve, cause I found out that my friend was leaving me, his family finally sold their house, so he has to move. And he is one of my closest best friends. If you want to know the rest of the story just ask me._____________________________
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#1,&2
I have read the rules and terms and will abide by them
love ya sis!
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Comments
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This was really depressing.
It's alright to cry; at least it's better than keeping it all locked up inside.
You made this poem your own because of that unfortunate incident. But I hope you can move on. Heck, there's more to life!
Thank you and good luck in the contest
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Reminder: 1) supposed to be anonymous, but you are very obviously my chey chi. 2) you didn't put the right phrase in!
Very sad...methinks I'm gonna miss him too...even though he wasn't technically my friend...Kay's sad...They were bestest friends. Anywho, GOOD POEM!
Luvs and hugs
~Avan/Big sis~
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Yes i think it is ok to cry. I thought that this was very well written. I felt the emotion in your poem and i think you did a good job expressing it. I know it's hard when someone you care about move away.
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I think it's safe to cry.
You need to let it out, don't let it build up inside.
Guess what?
You can have a long distance friendship.
It can be done.
This is a very sad write, and you did a good job expressing your emotions.
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