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Just for the Moment

The days of all the glory
and the bashfullness of us
dancing in the corner
without thought of any but us.

This dawn is forever gone,
but within my heart will be
the memory you always bring
of lamenting your love with me.

Every time I see you
my heart quickly intensifies,
the pounding and the banging
of some great beast I hear arise.

I'm sure you hear, like I hear,
the breaking of my heart,
for whenever you come near me,
a dreadful truth you impart.

For a girl you always bring
with you, to meet me,
but one thing you always seem to ignore,
is the way I look at thee.

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  • m2lost24get
    December 26, 2007
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    well done and friendships can withstand so many circumstances of love and life dispite the heartache we may feel but even through everything we stay strong and give them support in their life hopes and love because of how strong we love them even though they don't see it. thank you for entering and many blessings always xx