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To Heaven

Follow the Stairway
Into the light
Glittering bold
Shimmering bright

Follow the Lady
Touch of Midas
Turning the hearts
To gold beside us

Follow the Piper
Whispering tune
Queen of the May
And the Sun and Moon

Follow the Reason
Shining through holes
Making our shadows
Taller than souls

Follow the Stairway
Into the thunder
Leads us to question
And it makes me wonder...

Author notes

For a contest of a picture of stairs leading to light, the first thought I had when I saw the picture was of a certain song... So I wrote about that

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 25, 2008

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    Very good!!! Your rhyming is flawless in this!!!

    Very much enjoyed reading it!!
    (saw ya online and thought I must go read more...


  • rite
    December 26, 2007

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    I believe your words and the thoughts that provoked them do the image justice. While gravity and depressions of all sorts try to bring us down we continue to struggle upward towards The Light. None of us may arrive at our destiny unscarred, but refusing to climb the stairway will result in injuries much worse. Keep climbing my friend! Thank you for creating and sharing and good luck in the contest. Take care,

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  • XxpuddlesxX
    December 26, 2007
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    and once again another great write. i love it great job!


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    December 26, 2007

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    Wonderful...and one of my favorite songs! If it is the one I am thinking it is! Best of luck in the contest!


    Az

  • bluelion
    December 26, 2007
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    very touching and warm is the feeling that surrounds me as i read this great jo

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