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Ducks ducks go away

i went to my uncles chased by ducks
they try to bite me
my aunt chases them with her broom
that my mommy says she rides at night
i watch them run around they are crazy
my uncle feeds them so they will get big
then they will have duck stew
then the ducks will go away
untill new ones are born

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  • Scyphon
    November 29, 2008

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    Thats such a cute poem, I can see you running from ducks. Hope you did't get bitten tho. Congrats on your HM


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 5, 2008

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    Good write

    You know I was chased by ducks once and they bite to well I guess I should say they pinch you with their beaks but it truly smarts .


  • quack silver member
    December 31, 2007
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    good poem


  • pop123
    December 30, 2007
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    Fantastic!

    Great poem!By the way,how does duck stew taste like?
    Good luck in the contest!


  • Arizona Sunset
    December 27, 2007

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    Duck stew...yummy lol awww poor duckies ...excellent poem, best to you in the contest. love ya ~Auntie Trisha~


  • cainedbutabel
    December 26, 2007
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    wow i dont know what to say, now go read mine


  • crimsondew
    December 26, 2007

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    Dear Genna...beware of ducks dear..I will too from now on...
    Good write..
    Lots of and much


  • SweetNessaLynn
    December 26, 2007

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    hahaha This is cute. yummy duck stew.
    Much love,
    -Aunt Nessa


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 26, 2007

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    awwww this is such a cute write. i was chased by a swan once and that unfortunatly did bite me lol. this an awsome write well done beautiful


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    December 26, 2007
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    Haha, what a wonderful little poem, and it's very funny.


  • PinkPony
    December 26, 2007
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    I am laughing about the broom!

    Oh, this is so much fun to read. Thank you for telling me about the ducks. We have ducks on a big pond in our town and you have to really watch out for those ducks because they chase you, wanting something to eat! AND you have to watch out where you step, too, cause... they are poopy ducks.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 26, 2007

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    hehe this is cute you were not to share about the broom though lol love you darling goodluck in the contest and duck stew you know it is true

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