A blink of clarity
streams within,
hearing the eternal choir keeper
sing creation's psalm,
until touched by the natural verse
written from a quill of gaze
at breathless majesty,
magnetizing the senses
with mesmerizing chimes.
Undressing the conscious
of its distraction,
as we pen the inner poem
in our soul
from the brisk of scenic kiss
stringing visionary lights across our mind.
Inhaling more than senses know
feeling it weave a garment
over our essence.
Fingers unseen grip our insides
another step taken towards Heaven's truth
without having moved.
A contest entry
- River Lady (Image Inspired) by Idle Mind Wondering.
1500 points, ended January 12, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very nice
This takes a very imaginative mind. I don't think mine would have been anywhere this noce if I tried for a year. It flows very nicely.
Michael
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Congratulations
So nice to see a silver cup adorn this amazing piece. Well done as always.
~Pamela 
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The essence of your words reminds me of the moment in "The Hobbit" when Bilbo Baggins, lost in the depths of a dark forest, climbs a tree. As his eyes adjust, blinded by the light, he sees lust green, blue skies and butterflies and understands his darkness is just a spot in reality.
great job!
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Beautiful. Another step toward heaven's truth. I did like this very much. Best of luck in the contest. ~Pamela
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