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La Magia del Amor

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On lonely days and nights,
fantasies fill my mind.
Dreams of sweet love making..
Wanting to caress your charms,
conjuring your irresistible staff.
Touching, can you feel the power,
held within my hand?
Awakening desires, your body calls,
sentir mi magia.
(hacerme el amor)

Hungry for just a small taste,
longing for the essence of your spell.
Licking my lips in anticipation,
drawn to your alluring creamy nectar.
Wrapped in  your enchantment,
guiding me to the land of wonder.
Hearing your voice whisper,
gusto mi magia.
(da me cabeza)

Mesmerized, our bodies come together as one.
Moving in harmony, a seductive magnetism,
your magic wand is aimed, the spell cast.
Erasing the line between love and lust,
becoming lovers no longer just friends.
Both uninhibited in our desires,
fulfilling wishes without speaking.
As we both come to our crest, we realize
podemos hacer la magia junta.
(Eres mi mágico amor)

Author notes

Love can be magic and the act of making love magical.

English and Spanish

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  • ennovy silver member
    June 14, 2008

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    lovely words of magical moments...thank you for entering...novy & Brazos


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    December 30, 2007

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    beautiful sensual write, i love how you mixed the languages, intensifies the feeling.

    best of luck

    Tasha

  • ennovy silver member
    December 28, 2007
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    Hija

    Mi hija querida que usted ha venido un camino largo de escribir y estoy orgulloso de usted. Me gusta como usted desarrolla su verso libre... Su estilo es imponente.. La mamá lo ama Madre de Feliz año nuevo .......


  • Mykeee
    December 26, 2007
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    sweet and almost musical. I really like this. You did good, sweetheart. Very Good. - Michael

  • ennovy silver member
    December 26, 2007
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    Oh honey you have done a most wonderful write here. It so full of love, and the realities that are just beautiful. I'm sure MyKeee will love this read...good luck in the contest....................Ma/Novy


  • Ephiphany
    December 26, 2007

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    Honestly...I think this is the best piece ever...

    nothing like Magic in Love...your presentation of this was marvelous in both languages.
    Great job and best of luck, Im sure you will do well. Lovely picture & very soothing.

    ephiphany

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