Oh God
they summarized me that you dwell up in the sky
they also described to me that there is a one sky only
up there in the high surface zone where you endure
they authenticated it time and again
while it was not proven as sky was not only one
there up in the high surface zone where you were enduring
I located many skies where you were inhabiting
they all were the cores of your urchins over this galaxy
Oh God...
A contest entry
- - What Drives You? - by Desire.
700 points, ended December 27, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So Beautiful
I love the title The Core Of Your Urchins. Oh how I could so relate to this poem. It is such truth in our God in which the beautiful sky brings such wonderment and amazement of his creation and abiding love! Thank you for sharing your poetry with me, you are very gifted.
Blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: the cores of your urchins...
Wonderful piece You have penned and Powerful images brought forth with much energy
These lines grabbed and tugged:
I located many skies where you were inhabiting
they all were the cores of your urchins over this galaxy
Oh My~~ For this particular contest, it calls for only 7 Lines and I count 10
Love the words You have weaved and it just speaks volumes...but I imagine You understand I have to follow my own rules set~~~
but I will have another contest shortly for pre-writes and would love to see this one entered
Thank You for sharing Your Spirit and voice!
Best wishes to You in the contest
**Judging will be done shortly
Many blessings to You Sweet Soul
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Superb!
I wish I could get to know at least a fragment of what really drives you to such great poetry! Congrats and best regards!
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"Oh God, 'they' told me You live above and beyond me, but I see You reflected in every part of this Your creation, especially within the spirits of Your children, Oh God"...my own interpretation of your beautiful words...I like yours better for they hold the universal voice whereas mine are only...mine...(smile)...If anyone has read even one of your works, they know what drives you, and this is a perfect contest to highlight your skills in sharing that drive. Peace to you and very best of luck in this contest. Rhonda
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merry christmas my dear...this is a wonderful poem. keep your great job.
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