Swirling and dancing
kaleidescope hues
spirits whirl in chroma
with seamless integration.
Universe explodes
where two meet as one
whirlpools of elegance
twirl in tune.
Pigments exploding
across cojoined expanse
painting the firmament
in melding union.
In a list
A contest entry
- Abstract Perception by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended January 4, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a very beautiful vision you have captured, and I really felt the flow of this poem while reading. Congratulations on bronze!
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I love this picture and I love the medling of two souls into one with this piece.... well done on the bronze trophy...
Karen
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Very beautiful poem. Honored to be in this contest with you.
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Gaylene, you have done an amazing job penning this piece. YOu wprds bring together many images within my mind. Most of which takes me on a journey love. Thank you for entering. Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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painting the firmament in melding union..
yeah, i like that alot.. nicely done with such an abstract image..
m
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beautifully written gran it holds so much within it and really brings the picture to life. well done and best of luck
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