The cost of war,
Is rising through the floor
To assimilate with my frustration
With a drum roll of anticipation.
I do believe I love you
Now war is declared it's true
But my unsacrificed heart is too weak
So it is submission I seek.
I submit all that I own;
My heart, my soul, one forgotten bone,
Do with them what you will
Just give me your daily thrill.
She is the dress that would be best
To warm my cold chest
Don't make me fight for her
I just want to love her.
I submit all that I am to you
Use me, use anyway you desire.
I am but a small price to pay
For your lips of gold.
This is my submission
This is my submission
Now that I want you
You can have me,
Anything you want from me
Is yours if you accept
My submission
My submission.
A contest entry
- Untitled. by warrior-eagle.
300 points, ended December 30, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What Ever You Want!! by GypsyEyes.
700 points, ended January 21, 2008, 44 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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wow i liked this one! i know the feeling...giving your all to some one...thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
~NineTailedFox -
Lyrical and moving
Good luck to you in the Contest
Julie
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