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 My dear sister of strength
     loyal as love
 your heart is beautiful
    as rosebuds bloom


 Even on days of gloom

    your soft smile

 embraces me gently

    in sincere verse

 

 

 Refined as a fine wine

  each portrait etched

    traces moments

  upon empty pages 

 

 

 leaving me pondering

     upon your words

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For my dear sister (Mad Moon) I love ya sweetie~

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  • siahaan
    March 18
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    Lovely
    <3


  • Candy6
    March 5, 2008
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    A lovely write.

  • pruedence
    February 19, 2008

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    Lovely words to send a sister, she is lucky! I love the image you posted here...so calming, just beautiful. Wonderful words, thanks for sharing


  • HeavenonEarth
    January 30, 2008

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    Perfect Poetry

    This is an absolute beauty! With such serene sentiments filled with grace & love! The picture and background complimented this divine poetry giving it even more finesse!
    Thank you for entering the contest and touching our sweet mad moon's heart! Bless you for that!

    Much Love & Many Blessings~
    ~Joy


  • penman gold member
    January 30, 2008
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    Excellent

    A very touching and thoughtful creation. Truly so well done.


  • poetryality silver member
    January 16, 2008

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    My Dearest Timothy,


    This is beautiful and shares with each of us the truest love and affection. And she says she's not a poet. Go figure?! LOL Simply gorgeous! The best to you in this tribute challenge. There are only winners here!


    Always ♥

    Your Sister

    Renee


  • Mad Moon silver member
    January 13, 2008
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    ....sigh....so very beautiful. Had to come back and bathe in its beauty one more time. Love you, dear man!


  • Arizona Sunset
    December 30, 2007

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    beautiful dedication for a beautiful sister..loving tender and wow! ~blessing always~ Have a beautiful New Year ~ Trisha~


  • CherylAnn
    December 28, 2007

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    A very beautiful dedication for someone so special to you...This is so warm and moving I bet she will love it...
    Blessings

    ~~Cheryl~~


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 26, 2007

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    What a truly sweet write
    Your heart shines beautifully through out your words
    Wishing you all the very best in this contest!


  • Mad Moon silver member
    December 26, 2007

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    Ohhhh...my sweet Brother...I am in typing through tears here, This is sooooo beautiful, dear man. ...stops typing for a bit, and reaches for another tissue.... That huge and generous heart of yours just shines within these words, and I am so very honored by them. This sets in my heart so softly...so gently....and with immense love. You are a dear, Timothy, and I will treasure this ALWAYS! So very beautiful.... .......sigh...... Thank you so much for this wonderful gift of words, Brother-O-Mine. This is by far one of the greatest gifts I have received! I love you TONS!!!!


  • Jalalbad gold member
    December 26, 2007

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    beautiful devotion poeticweaver. Good luck in the contest sweet friend.


  • tara wilson gold member
    December 26, 2007

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    "Even on days of gloom

    your soft smile

    embraces me gently

    in sincere verse "

    So beautiful - what a wonderful poem that will surely touch her heart...Lovely!!


  • Stardust-luvr
    December 26, 2007

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    My dearest your words shine in wondrous illumination from your spirit to hers. She shall be truly in awe of your words that shine as to whom she is and how her words deeply mean to you.well done xxx much love forever always xxx


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 26, 2007

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    This is so gentle and filled with a tenderness that flows straight to the heart and just rests there...She just has to love this little piece of nectar...sighs...breath taking my sweet pet


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 26, 2007

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    this is a beautiful write and ep from your heart with beautiful words. well done and best of luck and i hope she loves it

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