Gentle is the whispers,
I hear inside my heart.
Reminding me of love,
that shall never part.
Inside me is this feeling,
I get when I talk to you.
A feeling of great beauty,
I know you feel it too.
Around me I feel warmth,
the kind that warms the soul.
and for every breath I take,
it is you I long to hold.
So with all these feelings,
I am at least content.
Cherishing every moment,
with you that I have spent.
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Not quite the rhyme I was looking for, but thank you for the entry.
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Wonderful write. Great job.
~Oka/KC -
this is a beautiful write, however it has too many words for the book. Thank you for the entry and you are more than welcome to submit another
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How very beautifully written this is!
I love this!
Gentle, soothing, and ultra romantic it is!
Thank you for sharing and for being part of the contest!
Well done! -
loving
This is a very nice poem and I am gratefull that you have chosed to share it with me. Best of luck in your future writes. Thanks for entering! -
Nice creative work here Ellan. You can feel the words coming right out of your heart! Just a beautiful work again! Good luck!!
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