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Don't Worry

I'll abandon my hope

That you'll want me too

I'll just give up

And hide in my room

I'll just unite my hope

With despair

I'll welcome it

And bask in its friendship

I'm going to cancel everybody else

I'm gonna be five hundred miles away

And two lines down

I'll touch myself

And not think of you

Should you try and see me

That would turn it all around

A lot of which would lift my spirit

A true ballet of emotion

Dancing with you

Loving you

Hating you

Then loving you all over again

From the outside

Understanding is a piece of cake

Living it

Is Hell on Earth

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  • Dorie
    February 20, 2008

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    Quite a mixture of emotions. Happens to everyone at one time. There are times when you want to hate someone but a part of you still loves them


  • Patpowers silver member
    January 13, 2008

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    Nice work Steve!

    Good emotional work here Steve! Brilliantly thought out from start to finish about relationships. I did notice one word that misspelled. It is "piece" instead of "peice" in the third line from the bottom. Thanks again for a good work!