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i'm sitting here wondering
am i real?
or am i just floundering
left to fall and reel
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tired of dreaming
just see nightmares
feeling like screaming
why can't this be fair?
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i wish i could just move
not think or analyze
just do to prove
that i'm here in your eyes
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i see you and all i think
is how mortal we are
that in a simple blink
it could end leaving just a scar
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the truth of it in my mind
haunting me in everyway
why can't i just find
some peace inside my day?
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i work so hard to push through
to continue this life
just to be with you
just wanting this to be right
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and it makes me cry
knowing its true
that all that lives must die
my whole world is you
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~i am nothing yet i still am~
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It makes me sad to read this kind of write from you. I guess even still to this day I just want you to be surrounded by happiness. I really do hope that one day life just becomes simple and "dream-like" for you. You deserve so much... and you deserve to be happy, and to be in a fairytale type love. I love you hun. ♥
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Thanks, I am in one now. Well, as close as life can give. There are ups and downs and drama with friends, but at the end of the day he's right there for me, no matter how crappy his day was. He's my best friend and my boyfriend, who could ask for more?
You deserve that too you know.
And I honestly hope, and pray, you'll get it if you haven't yet. Its worth it.
ur lil sis
jan
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good job, much better
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Thanks v, means a lot to me.
ur lil sis
jan
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GREAT!!
that was great jan i loved how u rimd it. the form is great sis ur a beautiful poey that knows how to but the true feeling in to ur writting and thats the most prashes gift u have u send messages thro ur writtn. in these on its the fear to go bk and have ur new life end like the last ones u haved. that fear in this huanteds u and u lov the one u are with and cant stand it if this one end badly but it will not my dear sister life is hell and u know this the most but times a slolwy change my dear when times get hard come to me. i am a vampire i will kill thoes that dear hurt u in anyway agine.
-lov to bite u+lov me- ur dear sister jen
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Heh, thanks jen. Your half right. I'm afraid the one I'm with will die, not leave me, but I guess in the end they're the same. Thanks for the comment and the applause.
ur big sis
jan
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Okay for starters I think you meant 'blink' not 'blind'. Second, this is very emotional, and from being so tired I'm unsure of what it's about. I hope things aren't going bad for you, you know I'm always here hun.
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Lol, come back and reread it silly. I posted and then chaged practically half the verses cuz I didn't like them. Its about how everything that lives must die, you'll see.
ur lil sis
jan
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