An aroma of coffee hangs in the air
Je suis en crainte
Tu es en noir
Need I say more?
Slip into my filthy apartment
Je suis en crainte
Tu es en rien
Yes, I'll go on
A little Thai food, music
Je suis en crainte
Tu es en mon couer
Need I say more?
Just so you know my darling
Je suis en crainte
Nous sommes en amour
Yes, I'll go on
Then I find you two together
Je suis en crainte
Vous êtes dans mon lit
Need I say more?
An aroma of coffee hangs in the air
Je suis en crainte
Tu es en noir
Need I say more?
Author notes
French is my favorite foreign language. I love it.
This poem says a lot in few words (in my opinion).
I leave it open to interpretation and hopefully I get some helpful feedback
ALSO!!!
I know a lot of it is in French...so here's what it all means:
Je suis en crainte=I am in awe
Tu es en noir=You are in black
Tu es en rien=You are in nothing (i.e. naked)
Tu es en mon couer=You are in my heart
Nous sommes en amour=We are in love
Vous êtes dan mon lit=You (two) are in my bed
Yeah that's it. You might have figured that out already but just in case.
A contest entry
- mixed Language poetry contest by Mykeee.
600 points, ended January 12, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I enjoyed this. You didn't just give it to us. You laid it out and gave us what we didn't get after the poem had been read. Nice way of putting this one together. Thanks for your entry
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