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Midnight Indigo

Come alive, come alive
open your eyes; revive
breathe in magic and thrive
on each breath-taking day
like a nouveau fresco
and midnight indigo

live the life of your dreams
among the star-streams
stretch forth and touch the sky
feel the winds' caressing sigh
like a lover that can't be replaced
only remembered with tender grace

come alive, come alive
dream; be mesmerized
by the loss of loneliness
but remember this
your heart was darkened long ago
by midnight indigo



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  • CarCrashHumor
    February 18, 2008
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    I like this rhyme scheme, it's catchy