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True Vision of Love

In front of all...
I hug and kiss you,
Despite you're in without!
Since You're my lovable child.

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There is no wrong vision when we are with children.Have you ever experienced?

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 31, 2007

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    The bond between a child and mother is more than you could ever truly understand... I've seen it and one day I hope to feel it. You love your kids like you love nobody else in the world.


  • crimsondew
    December 25, 2007

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    Cute....Like the form of the poem...Yes with children the whole world melts away..ok perhaps not when you are super sleepy like I was last night...lol

    • sanjay kanna
      December 25, 2007
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      Thank you! What to do? Only this kind of Tolerance and sacrifices make us to be perfect Mothers.