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Never To Part

Never to part, you said
Carelessly putting all these lies in my head.
Who knows how many other girls you promised eternity
Only to walk away with not a hint of uncertainty.
You’re the kind of boy mother always warned me about
But I would tell her I knew what I was doing, my face set in a pout
You broke my heart
But out of pain comes healing
Never to part,
Yet here you are leaving

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  • alaskanamber
    February 11, 2008

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    I love this! "Carelessly putting lies in my head". I've experienced that. Everyone warns us but we never listen. Bravo!