I find the greatest gift of all
is that of LIFE; big and small.
From the moment of conception
until the final breath;
pure magick in presentation,
and wisdoms that they left.
This gift bestowed by God above
is priceless, filled with His love.
A miracle witnessed by my eyes
and many more to come;
this lifespan filled with great surprise,
the things I've seen and done.
I'll treasure each and every day
that in His blessings, I will stay.
Yes, the greatest gift known to man;
our LIFE, it's mysteries.
Within His presence, proud I stand
and pray softly on my knees.
Author notes
I truly believe the greatest gift ever is that of life!
In a list
A contest entry
- A present for Christmas QUICKY by Son Of The Ring.
500 points, ended December 27, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I can see why you earne the silver with this poem. It contains a hidden truth that makes one think of the magic all around peoples lives. You really did a great job writting this piece. It really is a pleasure to read
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a wonderous aspect of life
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I agree, our life is the gift and we should treasure it and do our best with it by not wasing it.
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awesome
I just happened to put on random search and came across your poem and was blown away. Wow, you are a very talented poet! You have such a beautiful way with words that are so heartfelt. Great write!
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And you are a blessing to my life!
Wonderful words of perfection here and ever so true. It is such a precious gift & should be appreciated.
Best to you in the contest!
Tang
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