“They’re fish!”
Disgusting!
Their eyes are still on
They’re so silvery-
So, alive.
You know I don’t like them!
Not with their eyes on!
“Not really
They’re only chocolate!
Lighten up!”
They’re still disgusting!
You don’t want me to eat it
Do you?
Author notes
I got these for Christmas. And I have a real phobia about fish eyes. Probably hypocritical for a meat-eater but oh well. They didn't tell me it was chocolate for at least 1/4 of an hour.
A contest entry
- A present for Christmas QUICKY by Son Of The Ring.
500 points, ended December 27, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a fun and entertaing piese
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Lol... I totally understand, I love fish but I want the head removed before it's set in front of me and to have those eyes staring... not for me, even chocolate ones.
I'm glad they told you they're chocolate, though, before you could end up tossing them out
A cute poem and I wish you luck in the contest
Mom
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