Kiss me sweetly
In the dark
And when it burns
You kiss the mark
Kiss me again
I'm so sure
In the light
It will hurt me
So much more
Author notes
you know, I had ALOT of fun writing this...
PLEASE comment!
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Hehe, I can inagine you did have some good fun writing this!!
*Giggles*
I love the last two lines, miss violet!
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Hmm, miss violet, I like that! lol
I guess you weren't lying when you said you'd read all of my poems huh???
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It's great to read I am so blown away by it
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Hi . your poem is realy good x
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I like it I just bought a vampire movie to watch. I think it fits nicely with your theme. Under author notes you might want to put it a power point or a sideshow so that we can read more out of your series. This was a delight to read. Thanks for reading one of my works. I hope you have a great day.
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Glad you enjoyed writing it, thought it was really good, could be longer but is still good one it's own.
Adriana
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it was originally short because it was for a powerpoint series of my poems that I work on when I get the chance. Each slideshow has a different title. The one this poem was on was called The Darkest of Dawns. On its slide, each line appeared one at a time and a coresponding pic appeared by the line, I had limited pics....and space
Thanks for reading it and liking though
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chivalry will never die if i can help it, 245Trioxin. but this pome was exelent. great work keep it up.
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Where do you live then? In my city it seems like chivalry has been dead longer then the dinosaurs
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Minus the garlic and a nice tan, vampires really do have it great. True gothic romance...hey what do you know...chivalry really is dead.
Succinct and and enjoyable read.
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Thank you!
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