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Selfish

Take away my eyes, I don't need'em
Take away my ears, they bother me.
Take away my skin, it's not right.
Take Away my nose, I don't like it.
Take away my tongue, I don't talk much.

But do not take away my soul,
I'ts the best part of me.
Without it I wouldn't want to touch,taste,smell or see.

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Just another head poem.

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  • StarrEIDPrnceSS21
    December 25, 2007

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    wow i think this is so beatuful i especially like that line Take away my skin, it's not right. it jus sticks out to me great write


  • 245Trioxin
    December 25, 2007
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    For some reason I love the "ears" line. I went back and read it a few times. One of those that just strikes a chord, but it makes a point that (like pleasantries) it's not a part of the actual essence that is life, just a tool to experience it differently.