something missing
will to extend the night
wish to live another life
dream with words
force which pushes towards infinity
not enough love with lie of desire,
lies of noise.
heart in fever, demolished body
with tremendous desire of life
dream shouting.
a star which goes out at night
a time when others like each other in madness
without a brightness of voice, a noise
the single love, without single friend.
disappearance at certain hours
when heart of city fell asleep
floats a feeling as a desire..
missing something.
A contest entry
- There's Something Missing by Danna Hobart.
375 points, ended January 11, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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Very nice. Your last stanza was definitely your strongest.
Thank you for entering my contest.
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