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Mysterious Beauty

Mysterious Beauty
who are you?
so captivating
your eyes are the window
to your soul
they tell a story

So much warmth
so much beauty
so inviting
yet you remain
a mystery

Author notes

inspired by pic 11

A contest entry

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  • Laura
    December 28, 2007

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    this is a wonderful short and intreging poem i would have loved to ahve seen a picture with this poem though. well done and good luck in the contest xx


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    December 27, 2007
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    good take on the prompt.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    December 26, 2007
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    Wonderful

    I love this as well. Very deep and spiritual. Wonderful writing here. Keep up the good work.

    Much love and respect
    Wayne Leon
    xx


  • GypsyEyes
    December 26, 2007

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    this is really well written and is a great take on the picture! thank you for entering and merry christmas!
    ~Dommi