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Warm...

As I welcome you

with open arms

I cherish your body close to me...

as I mean you no harm

Warm and cozy

sweet and tender thoughts

embracing the adrenaline ...of us being caught

Touch me...in every way

my mind is set,

on you every day

I know you belong to her

but your mind is always on me

remember the day we kissed?

when you said here...

is where you wanted to be

Every moment with you is more precious than Gold

the day will come soon

as we live on...and grow old

You are indeed the magic in my show

As I keep silent

So no one else...will know

There's no price, to be with me

When you Love my soul

it's like being set free

As I cherish this moment

of Silk Rhapsody

 

 

 

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  • Kimmyuluv
    May 3
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    Very Creative!

    You are truly talented, good piece.


  • Xmjx
    April 24, 2008

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    I can tell that passion cascaded out of your heart when you wrote this piece its wonderfull from end to end


  • Blaque01
    January 23, 2008
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    This is filled with all the passion u have inside u hunni, i like

  • Blaque01
    January 23, 2008
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    This is filled with all the passion u have inside u hunni, i like


  • Swan song gold member
    January 5, 2008
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    This is really love and sensaul but has a warm tinge to it. Well done and good luck.


  • darell
    December 31, 2007

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    Nice!

    Secret love is always exciting aswell
    as passionate. The element of danger causes
    the adrenaline to soar and the flesh to ignite.
    I love the prospects of what this poem suggest.
    A very alluring and naughty write.

    • Ephiphany
      December 31, 2007
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      Thanks again...u are a mess

      you left before I got back with you. We will catch up l8tr.
      ephiphany♥


  • onesugar gold member
    December 30, 2007

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    Beautifully put sis

    Know this feeling very well, the wanting the longing

    Great write and good luck

    ~sugar~


  • Ithica silver member
    December 29, 2007

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    Such an intimate and forlorn piece! It sucks to carry a torch for someone we know are not our destiny... Sometimes though, they just get undeer your skin, and stay there... Beautiful write!

    • Ephiphany
      December 29, 2007
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      Thank you

      I appreciate your comment on this.
      ♥ephiphany


  • sidewinder silver member
    December 29, 2007

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    romance found within those breaths of time where love is explored from the heart!

    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill

    • Ephiphany
      December 29, 2007
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      Thanks again Bill

      I really appreciate your comments.
      ♥Lady


  • wendy
    December 29, 2007

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    I was looking for inspiration and comfort with my own secret love. I'm glad that I stopped by to read some of your words again. It's always nice to see that I'm not alone. This is exquisite!


    • Ephiphany
      December 29, 2007
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      Thanks wendy

      it's a pleasure to have you stop by and read my work.
      I appreciate it.
      ♥ephiphany♥

  • Nighttime angel
    December 27, 2007

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    this poem is filled with emotions. I can feel sorrow as I read this poem as well as heartbreak. I love these lines so much:

    There's no price, to be with me
    When you Love my soul

    beautiful lines these are.
    great job on this poem, sis.

    good luck in the conests.

    kat


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    December 26, 2007
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    i like this girlfriend. i still feel this way about my ex. Sometimes u just can't shake 'em

    • Ephiphany
      December 26, 2007
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      Thank you love

      I appreciate your comment...always.
      Ephiphany


  • Mykeee
    December 26, 2007

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    moving. Thats the word I was looking for. Moving. I was moved by your words of intimate sorrow and the revealing emotions of hopeing. wishing with no price to pay but to just be. Lovely


    • Ephiphany
      December 26, 2007
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      Could not have said it better

      my dear Michael.
      Thank you for being a part of my Muse and inspirations to carry on in this Legacy of Poetry.

      All of me
      Ephiphany


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    December 26, 2007

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    Heart breaking and heart loving all at the same time. Wow. This piece is so full of emotion and your presentation is stellar. (I love the flame) Best of luck in both contests, though I doubt you will need it. ~Pamela


    • Ephiphany
      December 26, 2007

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      Wow...thanks Pamela

      I appreciate you so much for stopping by and reading my entry.
      Greatly thankful.
      Ephiphany


  • Poetry and I Inc
    December 25, 2007

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    Hmmmm, well well well. AHEM.....so here we go again. You're not fooling me missy! What a conversation. ;P Shhhhhhh, I know.

    Great writing as usual. Behave!

    ~Inc."


  • ennovy silver member
    December 25, 2007

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    So you have just knock the socks off this old hen. Your poem reveals some beauitful feelings to someone special..You have done a wonderful job with this contest..think I'll give it a shot..............novy

    Lovely, lovely write


    • Ephiphany
      December 25, 2007
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      Thanks GM novy

      you are so encouraging and I appreciate you always.
      Good luck with your entry as well.
      Lady


  • PastelMoons gold member
    December 25, 2007

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    I love this!!
    "the magic in my show"
    Exquisitely romantic!
    Best wishes in the contest!
    ~Pastel


    • Ephiphany
      December 25, 2007
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      Thank you PastelMoons

      I appreciate you so much for stopping by and commenting.
      ephiphany
      I will return the favor


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    December 25, 2007

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    Very, Very Nice Sis,

    " There's no price, to be with me
    When you Love my soul ".

    I really love those words.
    Excellent write, once again.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce

    • Ephiphany
      December 25, 2007
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      Hey Joyce...sis...

      I appreciate you always anytime you visit is a pleasure.
      All my love,
      ephiphany

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