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just a feeling..

if phrases could explain it
if words could only tell..
i could..would try to let go.

but this,
it's more than hurt..
it's more than hate.
undefinable, impenetrable.

& this is all i've been able to
muster up for months..
fuck.

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Fuck yea! shiny toy guns rock! i hope you enjoy this teensy poem

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  • CarCrashHumor
    February 18, 2008

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    "& this is all i've been able to
    muster up for months.."

    this is a nice short piece

    thanks for entering it