your hair flows like the wind. your eyes are as bright and beautiful as fire. your lips soft as a peach. your body smooth as silk. you are perfect in every sense of the word. it will be an honor to be within your grace, to be within your gaze, to be within your touch. the smell of your perfume, the touch of your skin gives a greater high than any drug can ever give. the very sight of you lights a fire within me and melts my heart. the longing of your touch is one i would give everything up for. i am the arrow and you are my target. your heart is what im aiming for. to be in your presence is the ultimate sweetest sin that I will savour for there will never be another moment that will ever compare. to take a dive and crash into you, to feel your heart beat against mine is the greatest bliss. hearing your voice is like musical remedy to my ears that eases my pain and makes my troubles vanish away. to be your true one and to feel your affection is what gives meaning to this life. you are the vision in my eyes that keeps me focused. the sun of my day that lights my path. the fuel within me that sparks my drive; and the conductor of my heart that keeps it beating in perfect harmony. You are my inspiration.
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This is very nice. An unusual form of writing but I like it. Your choice of words show your deep care for this person and that is one thing that makes a great poem. Keep up the great work!

