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Perception


while meditating,
came across in front
of a lovely tree.
big and robust,
with energy,
strong and safe
calmed me...
all the years 
to grow, to become a beauty,
a metaphor of life.

a great turtle like autumn
forgot the way of return
stop short a little,
a little step accelerates,
comming again walking.

great hoof like dreaming
however, out of blue,
puts itself in escape,
now flying, prays slowly...
to decorate eternal course,
to please winter,
setting yellow leaves free
to fall.

we don't even see
each vulgar yellow leaf,
falling from our tree of life.

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~spiritualangel~

Prompt: Picture # 7..Tree of Life

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  • GypsyEyes
    December 28, 2007
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    oops! i forgot to comment you!!! well you got HM so i did like it!!!
    ~Dommi