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Gone Astray

Why do I feel
The world is evil
It's full of hate
And death
I just want to escape
There must be somewhere
Happier
Better
Than this
Maybe I'll find it
The sooner I leave
This place

It's nothing you did
You were actually
The best thing
The one that kept me from doing this
Before
I don't want you to cry
But keep smiling
For yourself
If not for me
Because you
Found the happiness I looked for
My entire life

The rain will still fall
The sun
It will shine
And the glass will stay
In the mirror
But I will be gone
Searching
Far away
For my world
Where everything's
Beautiful

So forget about me
But don't forget
You loved me
As you live
And I die
And I look
Gone astray.

Author notes

A freewrite about suicide. Hope it's good. ^_^
Cj

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  • AllYoullNeverHave
    December 28, 2007

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    This is very good. It sounded more like a break up poem at first, but I could see how it would be about suicide as well. Very nicely written sis! Great job! Love ya!

    ♥Chelsea