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To my little baby

To my little baby
By Charles Marks





To my little baby
So much excitement
So little time
So much to prepare
Coming soon you will appear
I'm so thrilled and filled to know
That I’ll be there to watch you grow
I just hope it goes slow

To my little baby
Just to let you know
I’ll be there when you need a shoulder to cry on
And a hug when you’re scared
I’ll be there to spoil you rotten
As mommy will yell at me for doing so

To my little baby
Boy or Girl doesn’t matter
I’ll love you until the day mankind dies
I’ll be there to catch you when you fall
I can’t wait to watch your first crawl
Or to hear your first words

To my little baby
So much excitement
So little time
So much to prepare
Coming soon you will appear
I'm so thrilled and filled to know
That I’ll be there to watch you grow
I just hope it goes slow
So I don’t have to never let go..

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  • SilverButterfly gold member
    December 27, 2007

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    ahhh the anticipation of a tiny bundle of joy! a beautiful poem you can read to him or her later in life. Very preciouse write!!

    GBY
    Silverbutterfly


  • Jenn-Swenson
    December 25, 2007
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    i see what u mean by that poem but thats all i can ever write about anymore. i still love him and theres nothing i can do about it. it was 2 years ya know. so i dont care u think that cuz i know it too. and u shouldnt talk cuz u write poems bout ur girlfriend all the time.and never anything else.


    • infinitechaos07
      December 25, 2007
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      Ok ya know what Swenson... No one cares if you still "love" ross... get the hell over it. I don't think you even know what love is or you wouldn't have played the whole "I'm breaking up with you cuz your an asshole and now I'm gunna get back with you in like 4 days cuz I miss you so much" game. You have "loved" every man that you have ever been with... hence why I say that you don't know what love is. The funny thing is you write poems about someone who you say treated you like crap and you hated every minute of it... Charley writes poems about someone who he truly does love... and the little baby I am carrying that he also loves. You just write shit about someone who you obcess over... have you maybe thought that could be the reason why you guys arent together? You never gave that man any room to breathe. You're like one of those 13 yr olds that has her first bf and drives him fuckin crazy by wanting to spend every waking moment with him. Ha ha whats also funny is that every comment you leave for someone talks about how you can relate to their poem because of shit you have been through with ross... don't you think that maybe people want to hear something other than that?? Something original maybe??

      • Jenn-Swenson
        December 26, 2007
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        what u dont realize is i was with him for 2 years so that is gonna take time. u cant just date someone u love for a long time and poof all the feelings are gone. and the reason we arent together is cuz i dumped him.

        • infinitechaos07
          December 26, 2007
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          I'm not saying your feelings should just vanish... what I am saying is that you should write about something else in your life or something that makes you happy... not all about someone who you say treated you so damn bad all the time. If you love him so damn much then why did you break up with him in the first place?? Why aren't you back together with him now? All I can say is you got some issues...

          • Jenn-Swenson
            December 26, 2007
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            i guess i just cant think of anything to write about but him anymore. and he was immature to me and we fought all the time and a part of me loves him and wants him back but the other knows i deserve better and the times i broke up and got back a few days later was cuz i was still in love and was scared of being without him. so now i guess im going back and forth between the 2 feelings of wanting him and loving him and to move on.


        • KometGirlJenn
          December 26, 2007
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          well Then you dumped him.....why? If you love him so much and have so many feeling for him. that just does not make any sence. maybe you should have thought your decision over more before doing so. cause you seems that you think you made the wrong one. so get over your mistake and move on with life...

          • Jenn-Swenson
            December 26, 2007
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            because we fought all the time and he was hanging out with a friend for 2 weeks straight and never returned my calls or called me or nothing so that was the last straw. so yeah a part of me wants him back and a other part wants to be done with him forever cuz how immature he is. so im trying to move on but i still have feelings so not sure what to do. cuz i deserve better but i still love him so its hard. and i guess i just cant think of anything else these days to write bout except him.

            • infinitechaos07
              December 26, 2007
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              Like I said I think you smothered the poor man by acting all crazy when he didnt call you... I agree with KometGirlJenn on what she said... you choose not to think of anything else.

            • KometGirlJenn
              December 26, 2007
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              Being in a relationship does not mean you have to talk to the person every day or see that person every day.. maybe you were crowding him way to much. and he just needed time to him self ever think that. you can think of something else you just choose not to... you are how you want to be not what you have to be....

    • KometGirlJenn
      December 25, 2007
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      Ya but he is with that person. you are just sitting there feeling sorry for yourself. wishing thing could be they once were. well guess what sweetie they arn't and you need to move on. It is the only way you will feel better about yourself.

  • infinitechaos07
    December 25, 2007

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    Omg baby this is soooo sweet! I really hope and pray that everything will go right with this pregnancy and we will have our precious baby to love and to hold. I love you so much sweetie and I can'y wait til we have our own little family.


  • KometGirlJenn
    December 25, 2007
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    good

    this is good I am happy for you

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