somethings wrong with me today
everyday
I noticed my cereal bowl is filled with drugs
Drugs that kill
I filled my bowl with milk
The pills floated there silently
Sometimes clinking on the glass
Asking to be swallowed...
I picked up my spoon
I scooped up several pills
All different colors
Like eating a feel good rainbow
I swallowed...
Another spoonful follows that
And another
Untill the effects kick in
I lay down
The feeling of the rainbow
Love the rainbow
Love breakfast
Cant wait till lunch
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very interesting write, i havent read one from like this yet. thank you for entering and good luck.
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Like eating a feel good rainbow
yea this poem is how i feel when i take my pills.
good job! the flow was a little sticky but over all i really liked this! thank you for entering and Merry Christmas!!!
~Dommi
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