our world is made up of
the elements on the periodic table
elements bond with other elements
it is a simple theory
and some elements
[some of the most popular]
bond mostly with themselves
i think we should all be
more like scientists
who appreciate all the atoms
for making molecules
both with different
and the same atoms
without them
our world
would literally
fall
apart
Author notes
This is all metaphorical.
All for you, my Lily.
Feel better.
A contest entry
- Sexuality by JustAnotherIdoit.
450 points, ended January 6, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Shoot.
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Awesome.
Wow, this is incredible.
I love it.
This has been done very well.
I love it. Thank you!
xx
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so true... it's always interesting to read something that plays with the sienific side of our planet. And I think you did it very well, you made it into something real and meanningful! Thanks!
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Dude. You rock.
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Lol. Thanks
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I love the way you think.
Science holds some pretty good metaphors, eh? Jolly. Merry Christmas!
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I love it.
Thanks so much.
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