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night's twilight

 

night

gloomy, frightful

obscuring, frightening, blinding

blackness, evening, dusk, sunset

declining, dimming, decreasing

defused, uncertain

twilight

 

 

 

 

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This was a class assignment for the Diamante form

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    May 10, 2008

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    great diamante...One tinsy lil thing...try to avoid using the same adj/word to describe night (fright)... but I love the alliteration especially in the 5th line. flows of the tongue nicely. and i just like the word twilight...lol. beautiful


  • sabre
    January 2, 2008
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    Night's ...

    twilight - not as enjoyable as morning's. To be young again!


  • Ithica silver member
    December 26, 2007

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    Easy to see why from twilight on into night, how these hours almost seem to spawn malevolence...? Great assortment of darkened words, to get us though the night...