Behind
I am always behind
always thinking of reasons
of when or why
yet, I am behind;
I am always behind
with silent
breathing
while
I'm waiting
I wait behind you expecting
for a knock on my door
letting me know
you're here
as I am
awaiting
your touch
seeking
sensual warmth
through out our bodies
necessity
of you
satisfaction
And
I am
still behind
as blood runs
through our veins
and our hearts beat
until forever
I will always be behind
behind you,
behind this love that will never die
in me
I will be behind
forever
Author notes
picture prompt: http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2382/558.jpg?1198078198
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This was a very moving poem, but the rules stated 50 lines only! Thank your for your entry...~Sie
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This is a beautifully written piece of poetry that flows from such a wonderful heart. I think you did a wonderful job with it and I am sure you will do well in the contest.
I think it next to impossible with you being behind in anything but your poetry speaks volumes...
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I have already told you how I loved the way you used "behind" in this poem. I just wanted to stop and tell you again that I love how your strength and skill with words has grown.
Love, Tom B.
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I found this to be rather sad. To always be behind, never side by side....
your words are so beautiful, yet I found you wanting for that intimacy so badly. Maybe this is what the picture said to you. I will never judge another's writing, as it is so very personal. Best wishes in this contest!
Shana
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you penned this with such a quiet peaceful pen,nice poem here,good luck MM
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Very, very nice!
Loving, gentle, and beautifully sensual!
Wishing you the very best in this contest, hon!
Bravo!!!
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