mammary glands bond
in bubbles structuring ducts,
perfectly fluff enfolding the right milk
instead of store cotton candy
and plain visible formula for baby.
rounds of pregnancy
circle around many mothers
with sub-series of trimesters.
Author notes
see picture for relation to my thoughts:
http://content.answers.com/main/content/wp/en/thumb/8/84/250px-Illu_breast_anatomy.jpg
In a list
A contest entry
- What Do You See Now ? (Round 4) by just mercedes.
700 points, ended January 5, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Prewrites From December 2007 by amaranthine lover.
800 points, ended January 11, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I like that
Comments
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i think that you expressed the prompt rather well, it's a simple and sweet piece that dictates thoughts expressively correct thanks for entering
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A very trippy enjoyable vision. I thought you deserved the gold.
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thank you for your entry. I am amazed by the depth of your perception, and the strength of your ability to put this into words that express it. When I looked at your picture, and back at my prompt, I saw it as you did. And maybe as I had seen it, before I created the work. Very well done.
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Interesting subject for a poem, but I thought it was really well done. Good luck in the contest. happy Holidays
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