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Love till Death

You said you loved me.
That nothing else came between us.
Death no matter what....
Said my life is important...
Did you really mean what your said?
I don't feel as though I love you.
I feel, as you’re a person who keeps me down.
What if I die will cry for me?
Or will you find another one?
Are chance love there?
Do you say you love me to get me laid?
Do you care if I am different?
Does that matter that there are people out there prettier than me?
Do you care if I cut my hair?
Is it that important to you if I meet and hung out with others?
Does it matter to you that I scream for my life while you grab a beer?
Does it matter that I cry for my life past?
Do ever care for me?
Idiot to see your girlfriend is dying.

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  • Sle3p
    December 25, 2007

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    Awesome

    I agree with my assistant Xxgorgeous-insanexX you might want to go back and spell check it. Besides that the poem was wonderful and i enjoyed reading it... so sad

    Fluffy


  • HaileeDear
    December 24, 2007

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    This was a wonderful piece but, it would be great if you would go back in and edit it. There's lots of spelling and grammer mistakes. It would be much appreciated.
    xoxo
    pixie


    • Ms.Vengeance
      December 24, 2007
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      thanks for letting me know and thanks for the comment darlin