The pain he brought to me
In the course of 10 days
Was unbearable and in my mind
The reason to all the misery of the world
Came from him at that moment
I could've cried
I could've been brave
I could've done so much
But instead I wrote on 100 papers,
I love you
For every time he rejected me
For every time he hurt me
For every time he made me smile
For everything he ever did
Good and Bad
I lie down in all the reasons
I should have left him
But couldn't because of the heartache
It would've cause me
Even after I avoid it, it got me
So I write all the reasons
And lie down in them
To think about the world
All the heartaches that happen
Because of love
In the end
It's still worth it
Even if its 100 broken hearts
For one man
As long as he loves me back
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First poem, Ive some others and I know I cant win but I still think that its worth the try.
Author notes
For the contest: Contest 2/7 Deadly Sins - Lust
Option: 5
A contest entry
- 119th Contest by Tarja.
450 points, ended December 26, 2007, 7 entries
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For my first time, Is it any good?
Comments
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I like this... nice flow... I can totally realate! Thankx for entering my contest and best of luck!
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I like the picture you chose to go with this, it doesn't really follow along with the Lust theme, but no worries. I have to say that if you allowed someone to break your heart in only 10 days, you need to maybe try and not fall so quickly for people you know?
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He breaks her heart in 10 days, He dates for longer and thank you for the comment
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This is really beautiful...
I like how sad it is and at the same time about love...
good job....
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wooooo this is real good... i loved it, it almost made me cry ♥ good luck
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