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One Moment In Time

One moment in time
One thought to think
One lifetime to see
And two eyes to blink

One time to love
One time to show
One time above
And two times below

One step she takes
One kiss she gives
One heart he takes
And two times she lives

One date attended to
One smile to last
One I love you
And two friends in the past

One knee kneeled upon
One ring given away
One beautiful song
And two wonderful days

One house for living
One family of four
One time of giving
And two wide open doors

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  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    December 25, 2007

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    wow

    I dont usually like this type of poetry but this one is well done. I love short form rhyming poems. This is sweet and tender and portrays love and marriage in such a sweet light. great job and God bless you, mark