May be as simple as
a shy glance
from that person in line
as you wait for
your morning latte
or as intense as
the soulful stares of lovers
wholly basking
in that special moment.
In a list
A contest entry
- Just write for you by zochit2me.
800 points, ended January 3, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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awww, this is beauitful, ahhaha i get alot of those shy glances, hehehe and give alot too, isnt that funny? =P
but this is a cute and lovely poem, great job!
stephanie =)
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An endearing penning which tells me you are a romantic at heart
But then I can tell by your other writing. Glad to see you here.
Thank you for your entry.
Becky
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Wow...
Cool one this! loved 'wait for your morning latte' 'soulful stares' and 'wholly basking'. just wonderful!
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"wholly basking"
love that!
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I loved this one...
so simple, yet so complex (like love itself).
I am very impressed.
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So sweet my friend, and so true, I am a one glance kind of girl. A look can be worth a thousand words and send chills up your spine, thats priceless
best of luck in the contest
-Layne
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wonderful
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Vague and yet very detailed
. Very good job, Michael!
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Great poem! =)
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Excellent
In the eyes read the message of the soul...mystery
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So many...
different levels of intensity in just a simple glance... It does really all start with a look doesn't it? They say the eyes are the windows to the soul...I guess it all starts with two being peeking into each other's souls...
I am crazy 'bout your pen Mr. Donnelly...
Merry Christmas...
xoxo
Heidi
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How right you are, Poet
Love, Lane
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sorry, that should have been never reach....
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OMG
I love this... it reaches a place most people think they will reach... I actually have this with my friend Jon, also on ap.... Happy Holidays! Debbie
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Love it!
Yes, I love a clean, crisp write like this. Less is more as they say. In your first line, did you mean "as" simple as? Keep writing.
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