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The Look of Love

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May be as simple as
a shy glance
from that person in line

 

 

 


as you wait for
your morning latte

 

 

 

 


or as intense as

the soulful stares of lovers
wholly basking
in that special moment.

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    awww, this is beauitful, ahhaha i get alot of those shy glances, hehehe and give alot too, isnt that funny? =P
    but this is a cute and lovely poem, great job!
    stephanie =)


  • zochit2me gold member
    January 3, 2008

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    An endearing penning which tells me you are a romantic at heart
    But then I can tell by your other writing. Glad to see you here.
    Thank you for your entry.

    Becky

  • ashjoe76
    December 29, 2007

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    Wow...

    Cool one this! loved 'wait for your morning latte' 'soulful stares' and 'wholly basking'. just wonderful!


  • ellipsist
    December 27, 2007
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    "wholly basking"

    love that!






  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    December 26, 2007
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    I loved this one...

    so simple, yet so complex (like love itself).

    I am very impressed.


  • Layne
    December 26, 2007

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    So sweet my friend, and so true, I am a one glance kind of girl. A look can be worth a thousand words and send chills up your spine, thats priceless
    best of luck in the contest
    -Layne


  • michichoeret
    December 26, 2007
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    wonderful


  • Wild Mustang
    December 25, 2007
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    Vague and yet very detailed . Very good job, Michael!


  • Pinkjodz
    December 25, 2007
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    Great poem! =)

  • amysticwriter silver member
    December 25, 2007
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    Excellent

    In the eyes read the message of the soul...mystery


  • Sacrificial Love
    December 24, 2007
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    So many...

    different levels of intensity in just a simple glance... It does really all start with a look doesn't it? They say the eyes are the windows to the soul...I guess it all starts with two being peeking into each other's souls...

    I am crazy 'bout your pen Mr. Donnelly...

    Merry Christmas...

    xoxo
    Heidi


  • Dalaney gold member
    December 24, 2007
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    How right you are, Poet
    Love, Lane


  • Happy Heart gold member
    December 24, 2007
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    sorry, that should have been never reach....

  • Happy Heart gold member
    December 24, 2007

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    OMG

    I love this... it reaches a place most people think they will reach... I actually have this with my friend Jon, also on ap.... Happy Holidays! Debbie


  • BellaD
    December 24, 2007

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    Love it!

    Yes, I love a clean, crisp write like this. Less is more as they say. In your first line, did you mean "as" simple as? Keep writing.

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