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Could You Forgive Me

Could you forgive me
If I took a sudden leave
My life was all a lie
You were so easy to decieve
A broken heart
A soul that died
Could you forgive me
If I no longer tried
A broken girl
With tears left unshed
It reminds everyone
Of blood she once bled
Could you forgive me
Tomorrow when I'm not here
Will you please promise me
Not to shed a single tear
Nothing left to bear
Execpt for losing me
One thing left to say
Could you really forgive me

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  • ember-blair
    December 25, 2007
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    beautiful. Very emotional. Good job.