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~ Tea Drops ~ {Haiku trio to aromatherapy}

Tea drops soothe frayed nerves
Steam arises--hydrating
Tension flows away

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Eyes close; heart's beat rests
Imagining paradise
Slumber's faery sprinkles dust

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Deadlines dissipate
With the lover's sweet embrace
Now cloud dancing reigns

Author notes

I'm so damn stressed....
Written November 4th, 2003

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  • Bluestar
    November 5, 2003
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    Excellent job on this write. As always, great choice of words, really paints a beautifully detailed picture. Can not WAIT until Thursday is over...that's the date we hand in Geography coursework...I will then be able to sleep again at night
    Much love to you
    ~*blue*~
    xxx xxx

  • MysticRoseTears
    November 4, 2003
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    I love the background...hehe mushrooms...hehe I love

    Slumber's faery sprinkles dust

    reminds me of the wall hanging my mom has that says
    "My house isn't dirty, thats just angel dust"
    hehe me and my mind,...what a fun time without sleep and lots of caffine/sugar


  • Naughtygrlred
    November 4, 2003
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    its terriffic what an image and i love the background image it so cool thanx for sharing keep up the good writes

  • Confused Gemini
    November 4, 2003
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    hun good job on writing this one and it seems like you just need to get some sleep if you need to talk to neone i am here also cool background fairies!!

    keep up the writes

    Gem
    Edited on Nov 04, 2:22 p.m. because ''.