Lips stained
with gentle hypothermia.
Frostbitten fingers,
calloused palms.
Hands over ears.
We hear no evil
on silent winter nights.
In a list
A contest entry
- frosty by Melissa Gayle.
300 points, ended January 1, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Prewrites From December 2007 by amaranthine lover.
800 points, ended January 11, 2008, 40 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewrite quickie contest # 3 by Kari.
550 points, ended January 18, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like the sense of imagination that you paint in this piece, it works really well for the winter season a very strong and good write thanks for entering it
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Very aptly put... Well deserved honors!!!
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this is lovely
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really like this.
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Like this piece
see you around
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