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The Sound of Rain

A masquerade
friend of anyone and no one
those that'll accept me and none-
peace.

A symphony
thoughts going everywhere and no where
a thoughtless saint, and a
devil without a thought-
harmony.

An abyss
of knowledge and emotions
a normal guy without normal qualities-
wallflower.

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  • High-on-Death
    April 22, 2008
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    I like this one, especially the bit about 'a thoughtless saint'.


  • FelineMuse
    December 26, 2007

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    You should read The Perks of Being a Wallflower. It's fairly awesome.

    <.< >.>

    Your last line made me think of it.


    • Hiddenspaces
      December 27, 2007
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      where do you think i learned what a wallflower is?huh?im not a dummy...dummy....lol


  • Kia Tenshi
    December 24, 2007

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    Ah! So pretteh-ful! ~<3

    I wish it went a little further and deeper...but then again that's what makes it good. ^-^

    • Hiddenspaces
      December 25, 2007
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      thank you very much.i am glad you enjoyed
      Merry Christmas and good day,
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