So many faces,
So little time,
To redefine,
My hidden lines.
Of whom I was,
Or where I've been,
My hidden thoughts,
Are dull and dim.
All my cravings,
All my desires,
Lost amongst,
Those fractured smiles.
Placid eyes,
Dark and grey,
Look upon the world,
In different ways.
My thoughts are lost,
Amongst the wind,
Scattered, broken,
I'm full of sin.
I'll smile with hope,
Eyes full of light,
To give you my trust,
One that will last your life.
I'm all alone,
In a world full of light,
I'll hold on forever,
To my one,
Blackened sight.
A contest entry
- Why we do what we do?! by Mezclita.
700 points, ended January 4, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Kind of what my version of this would be...
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Thank you for opening up and giving me such a clear insight into you. No matter how seemingly dark or full of guilt... if there's a smile in your heart then there's still hope~ and we hold on despite! Or something along those lines?! Lol... don't know, you tell me if I got anywhere close... Well, gl with life + btw, Merry X'mas & a Happy New '08! <3 Alex
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That's right! If you can go through life with a smile on your face, you'll survive. Life has it's ups and downs, we just need to take them all in stride. You got pretty close, though the things inside my head, could never fully be expressed in words. Yes, Merry Christmas and a Happy Holidays to you as well! -
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Opps!
Sorry about that! Wrong person! XD Wait, never mind.
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This is incredible, love the mystery in it. Its really a piece of art
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Thank you!
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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